Ben Sorensen

11 February 2014

Fleishcer

ENG 1A

MWF 9:00-9:50

SWA Straub

            This article goes very far into depth about how one should properly respond to a fellow students writing. In the first paragraph Straub says that people usually try too hard to sounds like a teacher would. However, on the second page, he explains that you shouldn’t sound like a teacher; he states that when revising a paper you should use your own language. Straub also specifically covers the way you should comment on a paper. He stresses the importance of clarity, and effort in grading. Finally he gives examples of different types of revising.